Discussing cause-2 revised

  Mr. Williams closed his music store on December 19. I find out that there are some reasons to explain this result. First, the store was on a small side street just outside of town and it is 3 miles away from the shopping center. As a customer, I will go to the shopping center instead of the store outside of town. Moreover, most of the CDs in the store were hip-hop and rock. Although the store was located next to the Fairfax Apartment, the residents of the apartment were almost middle-aged and senior citizens. To be obvious, they’re usually not interested in these music styles, so they wouldn’t buy them. In addition, the shop was open on weekdays from 1 to 5 p.m. While most people get off duty or leave school about 5 p.m. As a result, passenger traffic would become few during its business hours. What’s more, Mr. Williams would not accept checks or credit cards and it was inconvenient to customers who didn't have cash on hand. Due to all of these reasons, one must conclude that the business must be slack and eventually closed down.