2011年5月25日 星期三

Expressing an Opinion-1

  In Taiwan, students have to wear uniforms whey they go to school. Although some students think that they look prettier when they wear their own clothes, I think that it is convenient if we wear uniforms because we don’t have to spend time thinking about what we should wear before we go to school. Moreover, some students think that they will feel more comfortable if they wear casual wears. However, if we wear uniforms, we will have a sense of belonging. When we go to school, we will feel as though we were in a big family. In addition, a student can easily be recognized when they take field trips if they wear uniforms. Due to all of these reasons, I think it is better for students to wear uniforms instead of casual wears.
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  1. 椿茱2011年6月1日 晚上11:32

    some students think that they look prettier when they wear their own clothes
    // their own clothes--> casual dress

    if we wear uniforms, we will have a sense of belonging
    // if we wear uniforms, we will develop a sense of belonging to our school.

    這次的文章順很多欸 繼續加油喽XD

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  2. 靖苡2011年6月5日 凌晨12:47

    沒什麼大錯誤，而且文章整體通順有調理寫的很棒唷:D

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  3. 玲儀2011年6月5日 凌晨1:14

    In Taiwan, students have to wear uniforms whey they go to school.
    >>>Jordan 你是不是n案成y
    打成whey ~

    Although some students think that they look prettier when they wear their own clothes, I think that it is convenient if we wear uniforms because we don’t have to spend time thinking about what we should wear before we go to school.
    >>>很長 ~ good ~

    有清楚表明自己的意見 很棒

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  4. 佳穎2011年6月5日 上午9:05

    whey-->when=))=))=))
    原來你也會打錯:))

    I think that it is convenient if we wear uniforms because ~~-->這句可以修為I think it covenient to wear uniforms because~~~
    比較不會那麼冗長喔
    然後文章很清新，很棒喔:">
    寶貝賣:d

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  5. 惠芳2011年6月6日 凌晨4:02

    whey they go to school.
    是when喔~

    Moreover, some students think that they will feel more comfortable if they wear casual wears.
    這個的後面是不是要補充反面得部分啊!!!

    這篇很清楚~
    而且該有的內容也都很明確=)
    很好!!!

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  6. 珍儀2011年6月6日 清晨5:31

    In Taiwan, students have to wear uniforms whey they go to school.
    -->In Taiwan, students have to wear uniforms when they go to school.

    哇~Michael這篇寫得很不錯唷~而且變長了

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  7. 曉芸2011年6月9日 晚上8:57

    這篇文章不錯喔~
    不論是長度還是文字用法之類的~
    比另外一篇好多了喔^口^
    我覺得起來很順~繼續保持XD

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