2011年5月25日 星期三
Expressing an Opinion-1
In Taiwan , students have to wear uniforms whey they go to school. Although some students think that they look prettier when they wear their own clothes, I think that it is convenient if we wear uniforms because we don’t have to spend time thinking about what we should wear before we go to school. Moreover, some students think that they will feel more comfortable if they wear casual wears. However, if we wear uniforms, we will have a sense of belonging. When we go to school, we will feel as though we were in a big family. In addition, a student can easily be recognized when they take field trips if they wear uniforms. Due to all of these reasons, I think it is better for students to wear uniforms instead of casual wears.
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some students think that they look prettier when they wear their own clothes
回覆刪除// their own clothes--> casual dress
if we wear uniforms, we will have a sense of belonging
// if we wear uniforms, we will develop a sense of belonging to our school.
這次的文章順很多欸 繼續加油喽XD
沒什麼大錯誤,而且文章整體通順有調理寫的很棒唷:D
回覆刪除In Taiwan, students have to wear uniforms whey they go to school.
回覆刪除>>>Jordan 你是不是n案成y
打成whey ~
Although some students think that they look prettier when they wear their own clothes, I think that it is convenient if we wear uniforms because we don’t have to spend time thinking about what we should wear before we go to school.
>>>很長 ~ good ~
有清楚表明自己的意見 很棒
whey-->when=))=))=))
回覆刪除原來你也會打錯:))
I think that it is convenient if we wear uniforms because ~~-->這句可以修為I think it covenient to wear uniforms because~~~
比較不會那麼冗長喔
然後文章很清新,很棒喔:">
寶貝賣:d
whey they go to school.
回覆刪除是when喔~
Moreover, some students think that they will feel more comfortable if they wear casual wears.
這個的後面是不是要補充反面得部分啊!!!
這篇很清楚~
而且該有的內容也都很明確=)
很好!!!
In Taiwan, students have to wear uniforms whey they go to school.
回覆刪除-->In Taiwan, students have to wear uniforms when they go to school.
哇~Michael這篇寫得很不錯唷~而且變長了
這篇文章不錯喔~
回覆刪除不論是長度還是文字用法之類的~
比另外一篇好多了喔^口^
我覺得起來很順~繼續保持XD