2011年5月18日 星期三

Contrasting-1

  My friend and I are looking for an apartment to share near the campus. Here is some information about the two apartments that I found on the Internet. First, Fairfax Apartment has two bedrooms, but CAMPUS APTS has only one bedroom. Furthermore, Fairfax Apartment is furnished, however, CAMPUS APTS is not. Moreover, pets are not allowed in Fairfax Apartment. In contrast, pets are allowed in CAMPUS APTS. Most important of all, the rent of Fairfax Apartment is 1250 dollars a month, while the rent of CAMPUS APTS is only 900 dollars per month. The two apartments have their own benefits, I really don’t know which one I should choose.

5 則留言:

  1. My friend and I are looking for an apartment to share near the campus.
    這句有點怪怪的~
    My friend and I are looking for an apartment near the campus.
    就可以了!

    I really don’t know which one I should choose.
    要記得主詞是we喔=)

    比較句式用得很好喔~
    這個也有融合故事喔!!!
    真酷XD

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  2. 是要寫出自己選哪一個的原因喔
    所以你可能搞錯意思了~

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  3. , however, --> ;however,
    最後應該要選一個吧麥可:D 不然比較這麼多卻沒選擇挺怪的 而且這樣你們就沒房子住了欸:))

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  4. 要寫自己選哪一個的原因喔

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  5. 有用到比較的用法喔~
    還不錯~
    只是最後的那一句The two apartments have their own benefits, I really don’t know which one I should choose. 會變成跟我們這次要寫的完全背道而馳喔><
    應該要把你到最後想選哪一個寫出來喔~
    這樣你的比較才會有意義喔=))

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