In the future, I hope that I can enter Department of Applied Foreign Languages in National Taiwan University of Science and Technology. With professional teachers and good equipments there, I think that they will help me to learn English well. Moreover, if I study in such a competitory environment, I will make good progress in studying English. Once my English ability improved, I can get a job more easily because I can communicate with the foreign customers of the company’s without an interpreter. Hence, to reach my goal, I will try my best and I hope that I can be admitted to the university.
Once my English ability improved
回覆刪除為什麼突然跳過去式!?improve
the foreign customers
the可以不用~會感覺是針對特定的外國人
我覺得蠻好的 有寫到很多想進去的原因
這篇好像在沒靈感的狀況下寫的XD
回覆刪除With professional teachers and good equipments there, I think that they will help me to learn English well. Moreover, if I study in such a competitory environment, I will make good progress in studying English. 這兩句有點像再講依樣的東西,感覺很ㄌㄨㄛ 哈哈哈哈哈
jordan 的文章內容越來越好看了 真棒!! 恭喜喽 哈哈XD
回覆刪除或許可以著重寫你最想增強哪方面的能力在那間學校
without an interpreter
回覆刪除=> without any interpreter
內容有點少=(((
可以多加一些想在學校裡學的事~~
不一定要是英文~~~
像是其他語文的學習!!!
還有像是妳想進入的學校是工科專家!!!
妳就能說想選修一些相關課程~~~
增加專業性等等=)))