2011年10月18日 星期二

Future Perspectives

  In the future, I hope that I can enter Department of Applied Foreign Languages in National Taiwan University of Science and Technology. With professional teachers and good equipments there, I think that they will help me to learn English well. Moreover, if I study in such a competitory environment, I will make good progress in studying English. Once my English ability improved, I can get a job more easily because I can communicate with the foreign customers of the company’s without an interpreter. Hence, to reach my goal, I will try my best and I hope that I can be admitted to the university.

4 則留言:

  1. Once my English ability improved
    為什麼突然跳過去式!?improve

    the foreign customers
    the可以不用~會感覺是針對特定的外國人

    我覺得蠻好的 有寫到很多想進去的原因

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  2. 這篇好像在沒靈感的狀況下寫的XD

    With professional teachers and good equipments there, I think that they will help me to learn English well. Moreover, if I study in such a competitory environment, I will make good progress in studying English. 這兩句有點像再講依樣的東西,感覺很ㄌㄨㄛ 哈哈哈哈哈

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  3. jordan 的文章內容越來越好看了 真棒!! 恭喜喽 哈哈XD
    或許可以著重寫你最想增強哪方面的能力在那間學校

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  4. without an interpreter
    => without any interpreter

    內容有點少=(((
    可以多加一些想在學校裡學的事~~
    不一定要是英文~~~
    像是其他語文的學習!!!
    還有像是妳想進入的學校是工科專家!!!
    妳就能說想選修一些相關課程~~~
    增加專業性等等=)))

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