Expressing an Opinion-2

  Recently, the authority suggests building the forth nuclear power station in Taipei. Though some people say that using nuclear produce less air pollution, I think that the nuclear waste will pollute the environment if it doesn’t be saved carefully. Some people point out that we can spend less money if we use nuclear power to generate electric power. However, it is more and more difficult to find a place to put the nuclear waste. Moreover, nuclear power could be dangerous if we use it carelessly or when natural disasters happen. To sum up, it is for all the above-mentioned reasons that I believe we should not use nuclear power too much.

Expressing an Opinion-1

  In Taiwan, students have to wear uniforms whey they go to school. Although some students think that they look prettier when they wear their own clothes, I think that it is convenient if we wear uniforms because we don’t have to spend time thinking about what we should wear before we go to school. Moreover, some students think that they will feel more comfortable if they wear casual wears. However, if we wear uniforms, we will have a sense of belonging. When we go to school, we will feel as though we were in a big family. In addition, a student can easily be recognized when they take field trips if they wear uniforms. Due to all of these reasons, I think it is better for students to wear uniforms instead of casual wears.

Contrasting-2

  I am hiring a new English instructor for my school, and I received Lynn Whitnall’s and Debra Fines’ resumes. After I studied the resumes, I decided to hire Debra Fines. Here are the reasons for why I made this decision. Firstly, Debra got five degrees, while Lynn got only one. Moreover, Debra has more employment experience. Although Lynn masters more languages than Debra dose, she is inexperienced. However, a person who is veteran will work more efficiently. That’s why I want to hire Debra Fines.

Contrasting-1

  My friend and I are looking for an apartment to share near the campus. Here is some information about the two apartments that I found on the Internet. First, Fairfax Apartment has two bedrooms, but CAMPUS APTS has only one bedroom. Furthermore, Fairfax Apartment is furnished, however, CAMPUS APTS is not. Moreover, pets are not allowed in Fairfax Apartment. In contrast, pets are allowed in CAMPUS APTS. Most important of all, the rent of Fairfax Apartment is 1250 dollars a month, while the rent of CAMPUS APTS is only 900 dollars per month. The two apartments have their own benefits, I really don’t know which one I should choose.

Comparing-3

  Basketball and baseball are my favorite sports, and they have some similarities. First of all, basketball needs teamwork. Moreover, basketball and baseball are alike in having annual tournaments. I often watch the games on TV with my family. Furthermore, basketball is as popular as baseball. I usually play basketball with my classmates after school. In addition, both basketball and baseball have excellent players, such as Kobe Bryant, A-Rod, Chien-Ming Wang and so on. Above all, basketball and baseball are very interesting to me, and I really enjoy the two sports.

Comparing-2-revised 1

  John Adams and Thomas Jefferson were important persons in history. John Adams played an important role in the American Revolution. Likewise, Thomas played a crucial role in the American Revolution. Both John Adams and Thomas Jefferson were the delegates to the Continental Congress. In addition, John Adams was the signer of Declaration of Independence. Similarly, Thomas Jefferson was the signer of Declaration of Independence. Moreover, John Adams and Thomas Jefferson were alike in being the president of United States. Furthermore, both of them studied and practiced law. John Adams died on the same date as Thomas Jefferson. If you want to know more about their achievements, you can read the books about American history.

Comparing-1-revised 1

  This weekend, Lourie’s hoody and Green’s hoody are on sale. Both of them are ladies hoodies. Lourie’s hoody is machine washable. Similarly, Green’s hoody is machine washable. Lourie’s hoody is cotton blend. Likewise, Green’s hoody is cotton blend. And the size of Lourie’s hoody is like the size of Green’s hoody. Moreover, Louries’ hoody’ choices of the colours are as many as Green’s. Most important of all, Louries’s hoody and Green’s hoody are alike at the price. They just cost 34.99 dollars. If you want to buy one, you can consider the hoodies of the two brands.

My Favorite Holiday-revised 1

  Chinese New Year is my favorite holiday, and there are some reasons why I love it. First, I don’t have to go to school on this day. So I can stay up late watching TV and playing online games the night before. Second, I can meet my cousins. Since they live in other towns, we seldom meet each other for a long time. But we can have dinner and play together on this day when my relatives as well as my parents visit my grandparents. Third, the mood everywhere is resolutely up. Many people and their families go to shop for the daily supplies needed for the period of New Year. Also, we can see people set off fireworks in the street. That’s why Chinese New Year is my favorite holiday.

Describing a person-revised 1

  Colin and I just arrived at the airport, but soon I found that she got lost. She is my classmate who is 17 years old. And she is medium height and thin. Besides, her skin is white. Furthermore, she has a black, long and curly hair. She also wears glasses. What’s more, she has large limpid eyes. When you see her, you will think that she is really cute! And she wears a white T-shirt, black shorts and yellow trainers. Anyone who sees her please informs me, and my number is 0912345678. I will be grateful for your help.