I study at National Tainan Commercial Vocational Senior High School and major in Applied Foreign Language. Here, my classmates and teachers are nice so I have a wonderful high school life. Since I major in English, I have to memorize English vocabulary and English sentences every day. Though sometimes I have a lot of homework to do and feel very tired, I still can find pleasure in it.
In addition to the textbooks, I also read English magazines or listen to English songs to improve my English ability. Moreover, our teacher often encourages us to practice English with each other and we make a good progress in it. With her encouragement, many of my classmates and I had passed the intermediate level of General English Proficiency Test. Now, I’m going to try the next level of GEPT. To reach the goal, I will study harder.
Though we have to study all day long, we have many activities in the school. The major one is intramural ball games. To win the game, we practice volleyball after school every day. Notwithstanding we didn’t play very well at first, we never give up. By keeping practicing, now we play better than we did a year ago and even won the second prize in the intramural ball games.
I like my high school life very much, and most important of all, I really enjoy the time studying and playing with my classmates. I think I will remember these happy days even I graduate from high school.
Moreover, our teacher often encourages us to practice English with each other and we make a good progress in it.
回覆刪除這句好像不太通順
--> Moreover, our teacher often encourages us to practice English with each other; therefore we make a good progress in speaking English.
我覺得在寫完籃球那段之後可以寫說
就像對籃球一樣,我對任何事情都會堅持到底之類的這些話
可以表現出那種精神,提升印象
可以在多寫些和英文有關的事
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回覆刪除I still can find pleasure in it.
回覆刪除可以談談你在其中找到瞎咪樂趣,這樣感覺很ㄉ一ㄠˇ!!
<< 這個字只有九登才有唷xD >>
你第三段有點偏題ˊˊ 不過我正在想要怎麼改時,這時!!!!!!我看到咪咪嬸嬸給的comment真是正中我心阿!
他說的最後兩點都是我想說的話唷~ 你可以針對此兩點下去改會更好~
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回覆刪除since 那邊記得改完成式
回覆刪除第二段 or 改成and
try the higher level of GEPT
你也可以加上 籃球的部分阿 還有 社團也可以寫 實習也可以寫
然後你可以以你自己為中心去寫 感覺比較有說服力
或者有什麼其他特殊的經歷也可以都寫上去
and major in Applied Foreign Language這裡怪怪的= =
回覆刪除應該是就讀應外科~專攻於英文吧!!!
I am studying at Department of Applied Foreign Languages in National Tainan Commercial Vocational Senior High School.
這樣就行了=)))
Here, my ~here在這怪怪的~可省=)
該有的重點都有~~~酷喔!!!
還有英打中打檢定等證照也可以提一下喔~